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Anddddd...there is page 2 :D im so glad with this one! I know there are some wrong things in the comic....but use your imagination xD

The big wolf-like thing is Astaroth, he is pure evil and terrifying. Astaroth is not a hyena or a wolf. He is a demonic andrewsarchus, a prehistoric animal. He conquered the home of Red and rules over anything. More info on the next page ;)

I did read this specie have hooves and not claws. But because he is a demon i made a combination of claws and hooves.

Comments & Questions are welcome! Cricits are only welcome if they are useful ;) and not like: " The paws looks weird."

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~StarveDog Jun 1, 2008, 3:16:08 PM
:O OH my god, next page! NEXT PAGE!
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*GaruryKai Jun 1, 2008, 3:23:23 PM
;; awww Poor

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~Mithril07 Jun 1, 2008, 3:26:17 PM
Man, you've got some fantastic talent! I really, really love this comic already! There's just some tips, because I've got nothing to critique on, and they are: to make Astaroth seem more vicious you can draw him hovering more over Demas like in the last panel. It would look more like Demmy is not going to get away from them, and he is crawling at their feets, desperate to get up and fight or run. I love the close up as well. And maybe use more different colors when his (Demas) emotions are the strongest. For example if he gets slammed in his face by Astatroth's paw, the frame is grey-scaled and bright. Like when Zira "slapped" Kovu? Like you did in the first frame, but keep the colors. :3
And maybe Asta's shadow could be cast over Demmys body?
Sorry, it got a little long here, but I always try to see how you can use colors, emotions, shadows and so on to the best in the picture or movie-scene.

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~RedNight-Comic Jun 1, 2008, 3:34:07 PM
Omg thanks soo much for the tips. I could like draw a shadow over Demas. But it would look weird because ( you can't see it becauese its behind the yellow balloon) the sunset is like far behind between Demas and Astaroth.

will use these tips later if im going to redo the pages :)
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~Cerberus-Sin Jun 1, 2008, 3:34:29 PM
Cx Poor guyyyy. I love the coloring and shading and and and everything c8
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=Thylacosmilus Jun 1, 2008, 10:09:50 PM
:wow: andrewsaurius, how cool isen´t that
please keep drawing the comic :love:

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=akeli Jun 1, 2008, 11:12:51 PM
awesome!!! :D

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Mood: Sentimental ~kiwibung Jun 2, 2008, 3:17:48 AM
Omggggggggggggg, this turned out so much better then I had expected!! ;w; (And I already expected it to be extremely awesome ;D )

I just can't help but adore how Demmy looks like in the last panel omfgggg, WHY IS HE SO CUTE? :heart::heart::heart: >3<

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